1. Employers who do credit checks operate under the assumption that havin
g had trouble paying bills is a character flaw, but there is scant hard evidence to back this up. 老师,这个“had”不需要去掉嘛?直接说"…under the assumption that havin
g trouble paying…"不可以嘛?还有这个scant在形容词hard之前,不需要变副词scantly嘛?2. The use of credit checks is growing at a time when the eco
nomy is making it hard for people to keep their records cleanly. 老师,"making it hard for people…"能去掉it嘛?
1 having had trouble paying bills is a character flaw 这个分句中,having had trouble paying bills是动名词完成体作主语,表示动名词的动作是先于谓语时间的过去的动作。改为动名词一般体having touble paying bills 则有歧义,由于动名词的一般体doing形式既能够表示先于谓语时间的动作,也可以表示 与谓语时间同时的动作。这个句子是关于信誉核查的,一个人的信誉涉及既往的状况,所以最好使动名词的完成体,明确该动作是先于谓语时间的过去动作,防止歧义。
2 scant并非修饰hard, 而是修饰hard evidence这个名词词组,所以不可用副词,要用形容词。
3 make it hard for sb to do sth. it是形式主语,不定式复合结构为外置宾语(真的宾语),hard是宾补。形式宾语it不可省略!