1、写作决窍
总体把握，要素齐全；人称时态，逻辑了解；
关键字汇，动词第一；组词成句，结构完整；
组句成文，连词增色；此路不通，绕道迂回；
字迹工整，留好印象；从句适当，高分有望。
2、写作步骤
1.认真审题。审题包含要素、格式、词数与此篇文章要传递给读者哪种信息，告诫读者什么。
2.确定文体和时态。确定文体后，依据不同文体的特征和需要进行组织材料；同时确定出该篇文章的总时态与时态的变化。
3.写完要素，但不随便发挥。
4.先草稿，后抄写。
3、习作点评
[2004年全国初中生英语能力竞赛初赛初中三年级组]
Choose one of your hobbies and write an article1 for the school magazine2 about it. Tell the magazine readers3.
What exactly4 your hobby is;
When and how you became5 interested7 in this hobby;
Why you enjoy your hobby;
about your hopes9 and plans11 for the future12.
写作需要：
1.依据所提供的内容，适合拓展想象空间，灵活地将提供的信息体目前文章中。
2.条理了解，语句通顺，书写明确、规范。
3.词数60-80.
[学生习作A]
My hobby is read books①.When I was13 seven years old.I became interested in reading16 books.I like needing books because there are a lot of useful17 things in books.I can learn a lot of knowledge18 from books. Books also② can teach me how to be a good person19.Books even15 can solve20 many problems21 for me.I will read more good books to improve22 myself23.
①改为reading books，动词作表语时应该用动名词。
②also的地方应放在can之后。
[点评]：档次9-11分。
①要素不全，漏掉最后一个要素。
②句子基本无误，能正确传递信息给读者但文章不流畅，句子与句子之间过渡不自然，给读者感觉在回答上述问题。
③有少量错误。
[学生习作B]
My hobby is reading.Reading books is very enjoyable24.When I was young ,my mother used25 to tell me a story before.I went to bed every night.The stories were so interesting that I always felt they werent enough.So I began to read books by myself.Little by little I became interested in reading.I can learn much knowledge and many interesting things all over the world.When I read books,I can enjoy the beautiful sentences26.At the same time I can improve my writing27.I want to be a writer28 in the future,so I must study hard and read more books so that my dream29 can come true30.
①单刀直入、点题。
②真情流露，理由充分。
③文中带圈的连词用得适合，使文章过渡自然、
④巧妙用句型以表决心。
[点评]：档次13-14分。
①了解表达写作目的，要素齐全。
②语言表达灵活多样，字里行间流露出真情实感，文章有感染力。
③适合用连词和从句，语言流畅，且无错误，是一篇优质的作文。
[高分突破]
①文体：记叙文。
②要素：what when how why hope8 and plan10 for the future.
③时态：一般目前时，一般过去时，一般以后时的自然变化。
内容具备开放性，但它也是控制性的写作考试试题，因此不可以随便发挥，要擅长抓信息，写完要素。使用这两篇学生真实习作，一是由于他们选材相同，二是由于他们都是英语成绩出色的同学。同学B灵活用连词sothat,so,little by little,when,so that等，恰如其分地用新句型和短语used to,became interested in,come true等，使内容丰富，读起来优美流畅。其实这类表达同学A也会，只不过缺少技术加工。通过这两篇作文点评，同学们便能悟出其中的奥妙。
4、培养渠道
1.依据老师布置的写作内容，独立完成一篇写作。
2.与同伴合作，交流我们的写作，通过交流找出各自作文中写得好的地方和优美的句子，合作创造一篇新的文章，供大伙赏析。
3.找老师点评，请求老师指点，特别是如何润色。
4.自己纠错，写下深思。
5、备考演练
A
缙云山是重庆著名的游览胜地，天天有很多的游客。请你依据下面提供的信息写一篇报道，说明目前的游客在环境保护方面的变化。
写作需要：
1.词数在100左右。
2.条理了解，语句通顺。
3.开头已写好，但不计入总词数。
Jinyun Mountain is a famous31 place of interest6
B
阅读电视广告词：If we dont save32 water,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.依据提示，写一篇60-80词的短文。
提示：
1.生活不能离开水。
2.可饮用水在降低。
3.水污染紧急。
4.应保护水源，再借助水。
思路点拨与参考答案
A. [思路点拨]：
①文体：记叙文。
②时态：一般过去时态，一般目前时态。使用正反对比的写作手法，增加感染力。
③写作目的：告诉读者保护环境的重要程度。
Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest.Every day a lot of tourists33 come here to enjoy its beauty34. But a few35 years ago,some of them paid36 no attention37 to protecting39 the environment40.They threw their rubbish41,such as14 plastic42 bags,fruit skins43 and waste44 paper on the ground45.Sometimes they broke46 trees,picked flowers and killed47 birds. Some even made48 fires in the woods to cook food.How dangerous it was.Luckily,great changes have taken place here.Tourists are used to putting their rubbish into dustbins,and they are doing their best to protect38 the birds and plants as well.They bring their own49 meals50 instead51 of cooking52 to prevent53 starting a forest54 fire in the mountains.All these changes make us very happy.
B. [思路点拨]：
①夹叙夹议。
②时态：一般目前时态。
③广告词的意思水非常重要，应保护和再借助。
Water is very important55 to humans56.We cant live without water.The water we can drink is falling.But some people dont seem57 to care58 about it.They waste a lot of water.They pour59 dirty water into rivers and lakes.Water pollution60 is getting more and more serious61.So we must do something to sTOP the pollution.We not only protect the water but also find ways to reuse62 it.If we dont do this,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.
