翻译: 这一思想成为勉励中国人民变革革新、努力奋斗的精神力量。
这句话里的勉励翻译成英文时可以省略吗？
参考译文:The idea has become an important moral force spurring the chinese people to work hard for change and innovation.
我的:The idea has become an important moral force for chinese people to work hard and change and innovate.
老师，我的译文有问题吗？期望老师解答。
原翻译：The idea has become an important moral force spurring the Chinese people to work hard for change and innovation.
网友的：The idea has become an important moral force for Chinese people to work hard and change and innovate.
评价：
1. 作定语的 spurring 是有语义的“勉励；激励”，删掉后语义不完整，同时需要改变句子结构。
2. the Chinese people 指“全体中国人民”，the 不可省略。
3. “变革革新、努力奋斗”——这里面存在目的关系，并不是完全并列。网友如此翻译不符合原意：work hard and change and innovate。而是书上的翻译更为准确：work hard for change and innovation “为变革和革新而努力奋斗”。
